In the seminar class today we were supposed to bring the final edited draft essay after the peer reviewing. So today we got one by one review from the faculty and she told us toh edit some parts of the essay. So here is my final essay after editing all the things.
Who am I?
The complicated flower!
The question who am I seems to be the question that requires critical thinking. After thinking so much I am here to answer this question as briefly as possible for me.
I am a simple girl who loves having fun, traveling and also has a dream of becoming a good person. I will answer this question in two parts.
First one is regarding my personality, I think that I am very friendly person. I am also slow in judging people on the decisions that I make. It not only happened once or twice but several times. I always misjudged people like there’s one person whom I trusted the most, I literally shared everything with him but at the end of the day I caught him talking negative things about me behind my back. But my mother told me every-time that person talking behind your back are already behind don’t worry! I can say that I am kind person, loving and someone who always advocate for the right things to be done in the society. I am also kind of quiet in the group of people because I have thus fear that what if my words will hurt or what if I an wrong or etc etc etc. But when I am with those people with whom I am comfortable then I really really speak a lot. I just trust people easily and I take it as one of my weakness. I also have this feeling every time that I have to be nice, entertaining so that people be friends with me or talk to me. This is all about one thing that I am afraid of loosing people at the first place then all this things goes on my mind. Due to this reason I mostly restrict myself from letting people in my life.
Second one is regarding my likes, I love traveling around, knowing new cultures, new people. This give me a positive vibes that everything is beautiful in their own way. I love doing adventurous sport also like bungee jumping, paragliding, river rafting etc. I like adventurousness because I feel courageous and fearless after doing it. The second one is nature walk. That long walk in any beautiful or scenic places with some people who are important in my life is my happiest moments. I love to appreciate nature. Another thing I love is to listen music. Music is something that help me in every little aspects whether i am happy or upset about anything.
So now I am ending this essay by including that there’s lot more to it. “Who am I?” Is the question in which a book can also be written and someone can answer in a line also.But I tried my best to brief and tell who actually I am.
So now as my faculty told me to edit some parts which are adding up the incident why I am slow in judging people, mentioning why and which adventurous sport I like and also to change and make more innovative title. I did all changes I could do or I could understand.
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